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Dark Tales ★ Bk I: The Invisible Chains ★ Chapter 44: Unforgivable [26 Jun 2010|11:17am]

Title: Dark Tales of Randamor the Recluse - Book I: The Invisible Chains
Author: [info]eurypon
Format: Novel - Original characters
Length: Chapter: 9 296 words - Total: 356 285 words (June 23th, 2010)
Status: WIP
Rating: NC-17 - M - M/M Slash
Warnings: Violence, incest, rape, non-con, domination may all occur in varying degrees

Chapter 44: Unforgivable

Guess who (there's more than one) got captured?

Murno Tollbir meets Lorcko at the beach and has a conversation with Anaxantis. Rahendo and Obyann receive letters and packages. Lee-Lack Scarminckle has made a prisoner, but an encounter with the Mukthar prince Shigurtish leaves the robber chief worried about the future. Pages and Mukthars have a drink in The Cranky Goat and little Shermy steps on some toes. Storm over Lorseth means Obyann has to lock the door of his room. Another prisoner. This one is interrogated by Anaxantis. Later the dungeon master tells him the story of prince Pie, his distant predecessor as Lord Governor of the Northern Marches. The story is rather unsettling and plants a bitter seed.

Link: Ximerion
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Dark Tales★Bk I: The Invisible Chains★Chapter 44: Unforgivable [23 Jun 2010|09:51pm]

Chapter 44 of Dark Tales, "Unforgivable" is posted, at the moment for registered readers only.

You can find it here: Ximerion
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A Dish Served Cold [23 Jun 2010|08:28pm]

This was the first Yaoi - Slash - M/M - Gay story I wrote.

A Dish Served Cold

I started posting it on 2009-01-22. It has problems, some of which I will try to correct. Not all are easily correctable, I'm afraid. Also, it was riddled with typos. As if the Despot of Typoland had called on all his subjects. "Hey, let's all go to Eury's story and wreak havoc as much as we can. Just remember, when he's looking: hide. When somebody else is reading come forth in all your glory, draw as much attention to yourself as you can. It will embarrass him no end." I swear, I will be known as the Van Helsing of typos in Typoland before I am done. I will hunt them down mercilessly and stamp them out. No doubt some of the little critters will escape...

I hope to repost it fairly quickly, depending on how bored I get with the typo-hunt. In total there will be some sixteen chapters and an epilogue.

So what's it about?

Andrew Ashton grows up in a world very similar to ours, but where slavery has been reintroduced. While trying to deal with growing up gay and looking for romance, the institution of slavery begins to intrude uncomfortably in his life.

Andrew is a spoiled, little rich kid. So are his friends. He's not a bad person. He's just a bit conceited. He knows he will one day inherit the family fortune, so who cares about grades, work or whatever. He discovers that people seem to find him reasonably attractive, which only goes to confirm him in his complacency.

Little rich kids have their troubles too. He realizes he's gay and that he has a major crush on his best friend Sean Denham, the youngest scion of a political dynasty. In his society slavery is an accepted institution. More, it is regarded as a vital component to keep the economy running smoothly. It is the least of Andrew's concerns, wrapped up as he is in his own romantic troubles.

That is, until the institution of slavery becomes more and more a real, even menacing factor.

At the time I wrote in the Warning:

This story is definitely 18+. There will be smut, though not as much as you might expect. There will be non-con, rape, physical and mental torture, extreme humiliation, domination and slavery. But there also will be romance, true love, loyalty and sincere friendship. There will be fiendish plots, betrayals and cruel destinies. But there also will be sweet revenge and healing redemption. And lots and lots of angst.

I will try to take you on a roller coaster from the smutty to the mushy. I will try to rip your guts out, but also your heart. I definitely want to make you cry, but I also hope to make you laugh once in a while. Sometimes I will paint you scenes of a very graphical nature but there will be occasions that I will bring you to the very edge and leave it to your imagination to finish what, anyway, couldn't be stopped anymore. I want to touch your most sexual organ: your brain. What you do with your other sexual organs is of course your own affair.

I am a kind person, so I will not brutally rape your mind from the very beginning. The first four, five chapters are relatively mild. Gradually however, the mood will darken and at a certain point events will take a sharp, nasty turn. You will need a strong stomach.

If you should decide to give it a try, please leave a comment (here, or preferably on my own site). I'd love to hear from you

Link: Ximerion
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Dark Tales★Bk I: The Invisible Chains [22 Jun 2010|12:11pm]

Title: Dark Tales of Randamor the Recluse - Book I: The Invisible Chains
Author: Eurypon
Format: Original - Novel
Length: 190 000 (November 14, 2009)
Rating: M - NC-17
Warnings: Violence, incest, rape, non-con, domination may all occur in varying degrees
Link: Ximerion
Summary: (by the author) A long and brooding chronicle with bitterness, savage tribes, bloody battles and crowns lost and gained. About friendship in arms, love in bonds, devotion against all odds and undeserved tenderness. M/M Slash

Review: The story is set in a kind of Middle Ages. Although very recognizable, there are some differences with our actual Middle Ages. Some regions in this world have more a feel of ancient Greece.

The kingdom of Ximerion is under threat of an attack on both its southern and northern border. The danger coming from the north is far less serious and the high king sends his youngest sons to the Northern Marches, under the guidance of an old and trusted friend, both to handle the situation and to safeguard them from the far more serious situation in the south.

Almost immediately strife breaks out between the half brothers, although they also feel attracted to each other... though this attraction takes some strange forms.

Like the author states in the summary it is a long and brooding tale. It requires some investment of the reader, especially in the beginning. Those who get past the first three or four chapters are well rewarded however.

Out of the Introduction-Warning by the author:

This will be a long and brooding chronicle with bitterness and savage tribes and bloody battles and crowns lost and gained. It will tell about foul betrayal and fighting in desperate situations. About friendship in arms and love in bonds. About devotion against all odds and undeserved tenderness. About reversal of fortunes and growth in adversity.

Be warned: there will be scenes of domination and rape, but never random or unexplained. Of course there will be smut. There will also be incest. The graphic description of armed conflict and the sacking of villages and cities may not be to everybody's taste. Characters you might have grown to love will die and their death will not always be an easy one.

It is doubtful that at the end of the story there will be anybody left who is totally innocent.
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