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04:55 am
tigerkat24[Link] | I don't get the emphasis on putting shirts on in this chapter, I really don't. Well done! There's some real cuteness in here, particularly with Zuko and Teo. That's adorableness right there. The chapter does seem a little...choppy? I think might be the word I want, but that shouldn't take much to smooth out. I look forward to more shenanigans. |
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