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DOH! Man... here I was waiting and waiting for you to post a new chapter or magicbending... and hoping that you hadn't abandoned the story since you've also started that thing with Kouji, A Fool for Love, that Matrix story, the one with Song... I thought maybe you'd quit this story TT_TT

And it turns out I had just missed this update somehow?!?!?! Dang. I could have read/reviewed a long time ago. :(

So - ok. Love that Haru slugged Malfoy. AND beat up Crabbe and Goyle! XD Sweet. And he did it without magic? That makes it even better (though he did a little earthbending the Slyths don't know) since I've always wanted to see Draco get kicked. HARD. Plus for those aristocratic Slytherins, having an opponent who doesn't duel so much as brawl has to be disconcerting.

Upside: They'll fear Haru's wrath even more now because expelliarmus won't stop him. Downside: They won't underestimate him as much as before.

Granted, he still has earthbending as his ace in the hole... but every little bit helps.

I guess no one filled Ron in on what exactly Haru punched Draco for... I'd love to see his reaction when he finds out that Haru was essentially DEFENDING his father. Please let them fill the Weasley's in at some point. Haru could use a few more Gryffindor friends who'll trust him in the battles ahead.

Zuko - nice to see him go after Haru. Misplaced guilt? Do you mean that he'd feel guilty for Fire Nation actions against Haru's father? Or did I miss something. Figures that he'd be able to stand the cold a bit longer than Haru though. ^_^ He has that whole breath of fire thing he can draw on to warm himself in extreme temperatures.

Apparently not enough to avoid getting sick though. :P

I would love to see Teo's plans to improve the Floo Network! hehehe... he has enough distance from the magic world to be able to see things differently and improve them accordingly... even if he doesn't realize that's what he's doing. XD I like that. And he's just such a cute kid.

Ty Lee was as great as ever... though I think she's got it a little backward when she says Zuko did something wrong when he got his scar. Does she know the whole story at this point? Because speaking up to defend his people from actions of callous generals is not wrong to my way of thinking. It's certainly more honorable than standing by and allowing them to sacrifice green soldiers as cannon fodder.

Grr... that issue hits one of my buttons. :P Sorry for the rant.

Anyways, loved the chapter. Hope to see more SOON. (Seriously. Update tomorrow :P ) And I'll be back for more. I'm going to go read the 3rd chapter of the Kouji story since I think I missed it too. (I'd read the others, but I don't like Song and have no interest in Matrix fanfics... sorry)

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