Had Regulus just flirted with him? Remus smiled, taking the story from him. "Thanks," he said. "I'm sure your notes will be great. I've got your story and my notes here too."
He opened his bag, pulling them out and handing them to Regulus. "I really liked it. I think you did a great job capturing the protagonists loneliness and confusion, but I couldn't quite figure out his motivation for drinking the poison in the end."
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