max (sheffield) wrote in plan,
@ 2008-09-19 14:10:00

i wasn't going to post until i had all his facts done but i thought this would probably help make writing him up easier. so this is max sheffield and he's new to salt lake city. the basic run down is max has always dreamed of being famous and he got his big break a little over a year ago and since then it's been history. this past year and a half has been a rollercoaster ride for him. he's been in a handful of box office hit movies and had a comfortable seat on the a list up until almost three months ago. with the instant fame came the drugs, drinking, and excessive partying. max got into a car accident, a dui to be exact, flipped his car and knocked himself out. he woke up in a hospital a week later and as soon as he was cleared for dismissal, the court sent him to sixty days in rehab. when he was released, his parents took it into their own hands to pack up and move out of hollywood and into their new home in salt lake city. he is still stuck in his famous ways. he still has a cocky attitude, selfish, and from time to time a huge asshole. he doesn't want to admit his ride is over and he is no longer a hot to trot moviestar anymore. although underneath his jerk ways, he really is a nice guy, he just isn't use to putting his guard down since hollywood was a dog eat dog place. since he isn't eighteen yet, his parents still have the hold on his money and actually extended it until he is twenty one years old for the fear he might fuck up again. pretty much, he's struggling learning how to be a normal person. he can't drive since his license was revoked, he has to work since he has no other means of money, and now he's attending public school of all places. he isn't the happiest camper, but deep down he knows if he doesn't make the best of what he has it's just going to be another day in hell.

with that said, i could use some storylines. right now he has his soon-to-be best friend who will be the kayla kudla pb when they join. their mothers went to college and have stayed in touch ever since so that was a key factor as to why the sheffield family moved to utah. he's only been here about a month, so people he met before school started for be best. we can get creative, i like storylines that are a bit more then just friends or what not. neighbors would work as well. throw anything at me, i'm down for it all.

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	madia 2008-09-19 08:13 pm UTC (link)
	she'd probably think he's a huge ass and not treat him like a rockstar or whatever. i think a love/hate relationship would be awesome, not necessarily romantically involved, but i don't know, i'm not very creative lately. but i'm up for something. (Reply to this)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-19 08:24 pm UTC (link)
	he'd probably think she's a bitch just like a majority of the other girls here. i love the idea of the love/hate relationship, i'm sure after awhile of their remarks and pushing one anothers buttons, they'd find a common ground. he'll strip away his rough exterior after some time, just at first he's still going to be stuck in his old ways. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	madia 2008-09-19 08:36 pm UTC (link)
	yeah she'd probably think he's awesome, but she'd never admit to it cause it would probably go to his head. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-19 11:05 pm UTC (link)
	it probably would. he wouldn't be a jackass the whole time, eventually he'll put his guns down and be the normal max before the riches and fame, but it would take time since he hasn't been "normal" in over a year +. i can see madi and him forming a friendship, possibly flirting a little since he loves women and she is pretty cute haha. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	madia 2008-09-19 11:11 pm UTC (link)
	well she can at least help him try to be normal, maybe that's why she isn't swooning over him at first or something. haha but yeah, i love them already, i can picture them becoming friends with a little flirting on the side. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-19 11:43 pm UTC (link)
	that sounds perfect :-) (Reply to this)(Parent)

	chelsy 2008-09-19 08:50 pm UTC (link)
	he and chelsy probably wouldn't really get along much. she'd forgive his movie star attitude up to a point, but then get sick of it pretty quickly and be of the opinion that he needs to humble it up a little. i loooove creative lines so if we can come up with something cool from that, awesome, but i don't know if there's anything in particular that you're looking for? (Reply to this)(Thread)

sheffield
2008-09-19 11:09 pm UTC (link)

that wouldn't really bother max, he'd probably aim for her when it comes to being an asshole just for the fact that he knows she gets a rise out of it. i'm sure though after time adjusting and getting use to his new surroundings, max would break out of his rough exterior and try to be a normal seventeen going on eighteen year old boy. maybe when max started at west high which was what, earlier this week? we could say the principal assigned chelsy as his 'official' tour guide, showing him his classes, where lunch was at, the whole nine yards. max thought that would be pretty priceless since he knew chelsy before hand since he was here the last month of summer. we can take it from there, him being an ass, her being all "you're not in hollywood anymore max.." but he starts to grow on her and she begins to see him in a new light, although she doesn't want to admit it since she gives him the cold shoulder? idek this is probably a rambling mess i just woke up from a nap :-[

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chelsy
2008-09-19 11:53 pm UTC (link)

noooo i like it, it sounds good! :) she was probably a big fan of his before he came to salt lake, but once she actually met him she would disappointed he is actually such a jerk. she probably would've liked him for the characters he played, i'm assuming he'd kind of be a teen heartthrob who played some sensitive romantic lead roles that got chelsy all "aww" but correct me if i'm wrong, haha. but yes that sounds good, especially because if she wasn't obligated to show him around and check up on him she'd probably avoid him like she does the other ~burnbook kids.

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sheffield
2008-09-20 03:23 am UTC (link)

that's perfect, she could have pictured him as the characters he played and then when she meets him she's pretty disappointed. max would probably feel like an ass deep down and try to show chelsy he isn't as horrible as he seems, as hard as that might be. even though he is pretty much associated with the burnbook crowd, he still breaks out of it and talks to other people. he's more of a sit back and laught at what they say rather then participate kind of guy. not that he is perfect, i'm sure every once in a while he might slip up and say something mean, because who doesn't?

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	jay 2008-09-19 09:31 pm UTC (link)
	he'd definitely try to bring max into his group (Reply to this)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-19 11:11 pm UTC (link)
	lmao i love the burnbook idea, max would totally be into that and also the lauren conrad pb said they'd be interested in a line with max. so surely they could have welcomed him in with no hesitation and actually liked him cocky asshole, or not. plus max has no guy friends as of now, so that would be boss. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	jay 2008-09-19 11:13 pm UTC (link)
	oh man, we definitely welcome more people on that. jay's a cocky asshole himself, so birds of a feather! i think they'd be really good friends, plus he just moved from where he was living to his own apartment that he made his dad pay for so if you want to say they're roomies, that'd be sweet. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-19 11:41 pm UTC (link)
	is it cool if i say max is in the stages of trying to convince his parent's moving into jay's would give him the freedom he needs but his parents are very concerned for the fact he might slip into his bad ways again? (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	jay 2008-09-19 11:42 pm UTC (link)
	definitely! jay would not be much help with the pressure so they could see him as a bad influence. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-19 11:46 pm UTC (link)
	his parents would be like "jay as your roommate...? mmm no max" and he'd be all "wtf! he isn't what you think" and get all pissed off, haha. (Reply to this)(Parent)

	halsey 2008-09-19 09:40 pm UTC (link)
	love something. (Reply to this)(Thread)

sheffield
2008-09-19 11:14 pm UTC (link)

hmmm. she is in on the burnbook as well as ^^^ so if we go along with max joining the group, maybe halsey has a huge fan girl crush on max? she could have admired him when he was an actor and doing his thang in hollywood and now that he is in slc she can be like :O!!! and all tongue-tied around him? of course that would wear off after awhile and she'd begin to be normal around him, but max would totally know and flirt with her just to see her blush and get all swoony. plus lo has always been my favorite lb'er, she's a cutie!

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	halsey 2008-09-20 12:43 am UTC (link)
	i love it! i could so see halsey doing that and then eventually just be like watev max is one of besties now. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-20 03:21 am UTC (link)
	they could definitely be close like that, i love it as well! (Reply to this)(Parent)

	cristal 2008-09-19 10:36 pm UTC (link)
	i'd love something but i can't think of anything right now other than the generic friends line but maybe when he came here she could have drug him to like some party lmao idk :-( (Reply to this)(Thread)

sheffield
2008-09-19 11:18 pm UTC (link)

all you burnbook babes, haha. ummm, let's see. my brain is pretty much dead right now since i just woke up but i would love something. max is in on the group, jay-s pretty much invited him :] so they were most likely the girl people to welcome max when he came to salt lake city the last month of summer til now. maybe cristal and him had a little hook-up at one of the last parties of the summer (sober or drunk), just making out no hanky panky. she could be still a little hung up over it since she could have a crush on him, as long as that doesn't interfer with any of your other lines, if so we can change it! idk, if that doesn't work out we can create something wonderful when i'm more awake and functioning :-(

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	cristal 2008-09-20 02:08 am UTC (link)
	no that would be perfect actually! they could have hooked up sober and then thought he was sooooo dreamy afterward and now they kind of just make fun of the fact that she had a crush on him (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-20 03:20 am UTC (link)
	perfect :-) he'd still flirt with her from time to time because he's a flirty son of a gun. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	cristal 2008-09-20 03:22 am UTC (link)
	and she'd just blush like a man woman (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-20 03:24 am UTC (link)
	he'd secretly love it :-[ (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	cristal 2008-09-20 03:25 am UTC (link)
	i can see him totally making fun of her for it though :-( (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-20 03:32 am UTC (link)
	of course he would, he'd be all "pink looks good on you" lmao (Reply to this)(Parent)

	caiden 2008-09-19 10:43 pm UTC (link)
	they could be neighbors if you'd like. maybe caiden was one of the first ones that he met when he got there and since caiden's so carefree, he can just shrug off the attitude whereas everyone else might have a problem with it (Reply to this)(Thread)

sheffield
2008-09-19 11:23 pm UTC (link)

that's perfect, i'm thinking i'm going to have max be in the stages of moving into jay's apartment but he's still trying to convince his parents that he is going to be okay and not fuck up. so as of right now he's still at home. caiden would be the first person he met that was new, since /~bre is going to be introduced to him (she's a friend of the family) and then he got involved with the burnbook crowd (i'm not sure how caiden feels about them) so he is kinda going every which way. maybe if caiden isn't too keen on the burnbook crowd, he tries to tell max they arn't a good group of people for the fact they talk about people behind their backs and blah blah blah. although max wouldn't really change, he'd still be max and still be nice to caiden, possibly seeing him as the little brother he never had?

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caiden
2008-09-19 11:29 pm UTC (link)

sounds good, and since caiden really doesn't have a problem with the people in the burnbook crowd - he's really too laid back to bother with making enemies anyway, he can just shrug that off as well. he could just tell him that it's up to him however he wants to do everything. as for the whole little brother thing, that's perfect. maybe max can be the one that kind of looks out for caiden in that respect?

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	sheffield 2008-09-19 11:45 pm UTC (link)
	of course, that sounds perfect. max would be a little protective of him and treat him like family. maybe he would actually open up to caiden about why he went downhill in hollywood and what not. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	caiden 2008-09-20 12:19 am UTC (link)
	sounds perfect! :] (Reply to this)(Parent)

	talisha 2008-09-20 12:46 am UTC (link)
	love something. (Reply to this)(Thread)

	sheffield 2008-09-20 03:24 am UTC (link)
	got anything in mind, love? (Reply to this)(Parent)

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