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March 14th, 2008
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Date:April 20th, 2008 08:02 am (UTC)
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Foxy here. Hey, I'm not sure how much you'd appreciate this, but I know that the scene where Lelani is examining Zuko's throat is wrong. The esophagus (I'm not faulting British spelling) is actually collapsed when not doing it's job in one way or another, and it would be pretty near impossible for Zuko to breathe while Lelani was doing her thing (mostly because the hyoid brings the larynx forward and under the tongue, this is why you're Adam's apple (thyroid) goes up when you swallow). Plus, his epiglottis would be down, creating another barrier to protect the lungs, and Lelani couldn't touch his larynx-but she could touch his thyroid that houses the larynx. Sorry, Communicative Disorder majors are very informed about this sort of thing, and I thought you might appreciate details. Feel free to im me about questions/comments.
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