REJECTED
Thank you for applying but we have decided to reject this application.
Your background doesn't give us a look into his character, a lot of it is focused on his parents which state that they cared enough to look after him, stop mother accepted him and yet, he is starved for attention. This part should have been elaborated on more as you were using this on his reasoning to join the company. What was wrong with their love? Why was it not enough.
Overall, there was nothing that really grabbed us about his character. There was no feel for him. Not enough explanation to what started his gaming habits, what got him so into it and so forth.
Due to this reason, the application was rejected. Please feel free to apply for another character.
Thank you for your time.
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