Pending...
While there were things about your application that we liked, and did find parts of it to ve very creative. However, at the moment there's just not enough elaboration.
1) The background and personality feel a little short. Give us more elaboration on Shikamaru's years through school, and how he felt about being labeled as a genius.
2) Have you discussed this background with the Ino-mun? Please either discuss it with the mun, or remove it from his background (or replace Ino with an NPC).
3) Also to be pointed out is the text message from Ino in the third person sample, this is godmodding and not allowed.
With these in mind, we're going to have to put your application in pending for the moment. You'll have one week to rewrite certain areas and add more elaboration, and then repost.
Thank you for taking the time to apply!
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