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	couten 2011-05-19 11:52 pm UTC (link)
	it's in a troll journal right now, but ta-da. i'm usually okay with narratives, but this one is bothering me, for some reason. i don't know if it's the wording, or if it's because i finished it in one sitting - whatever, i'm just not confident about it. if you could let me know what you think of it overall, or if it even makes sense, i would really, really appreciate it! (Reply to this)(Thread)

	feldstein 2011-05-20 12:08 am UTC (link)
	while it makes me incredibly bummed, i think it's awesome! my only thing is i got a little confused on the speakers towards the end. maybe that's just because i'm tired. otherwise, you did awesome. (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	couten 2011-05-20 12:11 am UTC (link)
	aw, haha. i'll take another look and the ending and try rewording it. i'm still playing around with the wording, too. but thank you so much, i really appreciate you taking a look at it! (Reply to this)(Parent)(Thread)

	feldstein 2011-05-20 12:15 am UTC (link)
	i don't think our guys have ever interacted but i loved the couple from afar so i'm like SIGH. but it might just me in my sleepy state, otherwise i think you did a great job with it. anytime, too, if you want a second opinion. i think anyone who does a narrative is so brave, i am so terrible at them! (Reply to this)(Parent)

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