lauramcewan:

Oh, gods.

Going through my TPM stories to update them for new site pages and noticing the head-bouncing in them.

Egads.

I'm better about that now, really. ;-)

Damn, I never thought I'd be embarrassed by my earlier work! Well, maybe in that particular element, until Lori and Ghostie taught me how to stick to one POV and how to recognize it. I think maybe I still had a good sense of story, even if I didn't realize the POV issues.

AH, "Love Notes". Heh. Damn, that seems forever ago...