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Max Szasz ([info]questionthis) wrote,
@ 2010-04-18 23:21:00

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On the Edge

“On the Edge” Tentative title would like a better one.

Pre-Plot

- Helena, Max’s mom, meets with Max and decides to give him an important family heirloom from her side of the family a signet ring that has been in her family for generations.

In (Gotham)

-The Mafia boss of (Gotham) breaks the forbidden rules of the Mafia (Stealing, brazen Cop killing, and Kidnapping)

-Max and others catches on to these crimes and do a preliminary investigation.

-Max and anyone else investigation bring up what’s happening to the other outsiders who then decide to do something about it.

-Two pronged attack one team attempts to take down the boss and his goons while the other team looks for evidence and rescues any kidnapping victims.

-While most of the goons are taken down, the victims are rescued, and a lot of damning evidence is found, however the Boss escapes back to Italy and into hiding.

-A bit later rumors are heard of a meeting of the main Mafia family heads which the boss will be attending and wants to use to escape the heroes for good by using the other bosses powers to go into hiding forever.

In Venice

-Meeting of the heads of the main Mafia Families meeting in Venice. The security is too tight for the Outsiders to get into without setting of alarms and alerting everyone.

-Max figures out how he could get them in there without much trouble but to do so requires that he reveal his identity. How he would get them in is by using his status as the heir of a former big family to simply walk in as he has the right to.

-Uses the Bertinelli signet ring to prove his claim. Max has to walk in without costume and mask in nice suit other may have to not wear costumes though still wear masks.

-Once in the meeting Outsiders plead their case to the Heads of the mafia families.

-It is decided that the only way to decide this case is a trial by fire in which the outsiders minus Max fight the boss’s five best men whoever wins the most fights is decided to be truthful and proven correct.

-Outsiders win the most fights and are proven correct then the boss is severely punished for his actions and Outsiders go home. (Depending on things may have the boss challenge make to a duel of honor after he loses the fights in a final attempt to save himself)

-Depending on what we want to happen Max could be given control of the old bosses parts of the city by the leaders for his decisive victory something Max does not want and will probably not do anything with. This also puts Max and the Outsiders on the organized crime radar something they probably and in Max’s case definitely do not want.



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