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feelgoodmods ([info]feelgoodmods) wrote,
@ 2009-06-03 14:25:00


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applications;
After reading the rules and FAQ, and placing a reservation, you're finally ready to apply!

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Player
Name:
Are you 17+?:
Personal Journal: (LJ is fine.)

Contact Information:
AIM: (mandatory)
Email:
Timezone:
Availability:
Other:

Past RP Experience: (if you don't have any that's fine, but providing links or names of characters/places you have RPed before would help the mods evaluate your skills.)

Character
Name:
Age:
Sexuality: (what gender they prefer in their personal lives and what gender(s) they find acceptable to be paired with in movies.)
Role in company:
PB:

Background History: (min. 300 words.)
Personality, Likes & Dislikes: (min. 200 words.)

Sample Post:

First Person (min. 200 words.)

Third Person (min. 200 words.)


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If you're having trouble thinking of anything, you may use one of the prompts below. Using these is entirely up to you!

Prompts
- Gambling
- Success
- Dare
- Cellphones



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Rock Lee App Final
[info]lunaka_dementor
2009-08-23 12:02 am UTC (link)
Sample Post:
First Person

Prompt - Gambling -

Well...I've done it. I've gambled! For the first time in my life I gambled. And my god do I feel guilty! I know it was just one little fruit machine, but still! What if I get addicted to it? What if I end up spending all my hard earned money on fruit machines and end up an alcoholic drunk sitting outside the casino waiting for somebody to give me a dollar so I can spent it on...I'm being silly, aren't I? Still...I don't think I like gambling. I think I'll keep clear from now on.

Prompt - Success -

SUCCESS! I finally have convinced Mr. Jackson that I can work all day on Saturday at the pool! It isn't that long a shift after all... Seven am until nine-thirty pm. And I am sitting down most of the time. I don't think I've had to save a single person since I started this job... That should be a good thing though! At least it means that the people that visit our pool are safety concious. On the downside, it means that I get very bored sometimes... Still! It earns me enough money to pay for my flat and food! That is what is important in the end I think.


Third Person

Prompt - Dare -

'Oh my god...' Lee groaned, hiding his head in his hands. He couldn't believe he'd been so stupid as to join in this game of truth and dare! He had wondered why exactly Mary-Anne and her little cronies had invited him. Now it was obvious.

"Well Lee?" The girl sneered. "Are you going to do the dare or aren't you? Pull down Mr. Macentyre's pants!"

Lee flushed. "Do I really have to? Will I not get in trouble for such an action?"

"Duh!"

Lee sighed and got up, heading over to Mr. Macentyre and wringing his hands. If he did it, he'd be in a bucketload of trouble. If he didn't, everyone would call him a whuss. But Mr. Macentyre had been so kind to him... He set his jaw and headed back. "I will not perform such a stupid and immature dare!" He said huffily, and walked off with his head up high.

It was shoved in the toilet later that day.

Prompt - Cellphone -

"Excuse me..."

Lee looked down from his seat on the lifeguard's chair at the young man below. "Yes? Can I help you?" He asked kindly.

"Um..." The boy flushed. "Well...I was kinda wondering if I could get your cell number? I've been coming here for ages a-and..."

Lee smiled softly. "I am sorry, but although I would be glad to take your number as a friend, I am afraid I am already in a relationship." He said gently.

"O-oh...nevermind." The boy gave a weak smile and wandered off.

Lee felt mean, lying like that, but he just wasn't interested in a relationship so soon after his breakup with Jessica.

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We're sorry...
[info]feelgoodmods
2009-08-24 08:42 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for applying, but after reviewing your application for Rock Lee, the mods have collectively decided to reject your application at this time.

Some points for you to remember in the future, when you're given a minimum amount of words required as a guide, you should write more than, or beyond what the limit is. All portions of your application just barely met the minimum, which doesn't show that you've put a lot of time or thought into the background or personality. Even if your ideas were good, and would work great for a Lee, you really didn't elaborate, so we're left with a very vague outline of what your characterization will be like.

Though you've said Lee doesn't speak in contractions, you had him use them continuously through your first person sample. Please keep that in mind for the future, if you're going to make it a character point for Lee.

While you are welcome to apply for any other characters at this point, since your application was denied for Lee, we ask that you not apply for him again until a month has passed.

Thank you again for showing interest in us, and taking the time to apply!

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