I love how your characters always use a lot of vernacular. (I probably used that wrong didn't I? Meh.) And I love how you always include their little mumblings, ums and uhs and yannos, that kinda thing. It makes them more realistic, makes it easier for me to hear them in my head. You always depict their emotions so perfectly, I can really see their expressions (especially when they're excited or crazy turned-on) in my head. I love your characterizations, they're always so wonderful and realistic.
Hook: Why are you so interested in Wendy? (Peter is particularly curious about this one.)
Marlowe: What was your honest first impression of Laura? How does it compare with how you see her now?
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