brenda (lastbeautifool) wrote,
@ 2008-06-08 16:05:00

* trademarks and truth.
What would you say are the trademarks of my writing? What themes or quirks or turns of phrase have you noticed? What is it that makes a story by me -- well, a story by me?

AND

Certain characters of mine have been dosed with a potion that makes them tell only the truth. Ask them any question that you want, and he or she will answer truthfully!

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lastbeautifool
2008-06-09 07:27 pm UTC (link)

me: i knew i was going to regret this. sigh.

Eli: Oh, totally. If things keep the way they are now, then yeah. I really think we could work for that long. I mean, sure, shit can get in the way. I never know what's going to happen. But right now I'm still sorta crazy in love, so I can't really think about my future without him. Jesus, he's turning me into a girl.

Poe: Both make me happy, both hurt me. Nico tells me that he loves me and that he only wants me, but I don't believe him. I don't believe that that will always be true. Sometimes I think he loves me just because I love him, just because he wants to be loved, and I think he could find that satisfaction with anyone else. Viollca loves me so intensely that sometimes I wonder if it's me that he loves or some idea of me, or even if it's love at all and not just loneliness. I'm always waiting to disappoint them or for them to disappoint me. I'm waiting to say the wrong thing or do the wrong thing and for Nico to shout at me again and send me away. I'm waiting for Viollca to finally realize that I'm not what or who he thinks I am and to realize that he's wasted his heart on me when he should be finding someone else. I think, perhaps, that I am incapable of any or this. Loneliness is best for me.

Charlie: I understand that he wants to let me do what I do or whatever, and he's told me before to be careful and not go with certain types of people. But you're right, he's never ever asked me to stop, or even hinted at asking me to stop. Not ever. It... it bothers me. I think he knows that there isn't anything else I can do to take care of myself, and he doesn't all the way want to take care of me. He's not ready for that yet. So it makes me sad. But one day, it will happen, I think. One day when he's ready, I'll be ready too.

Gabe: At this point, I think the guilt would be too much. I'm sharing my life with someone. The last time that I was with someone else, Hans disappeared and even if you say that he would never find out, I know that he would know. I could never hurt him like that now.

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