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weighed_down ([info]weighed_down) wrote,
@ 2011-10-16 17:39:00


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 When Julian had returned Edmund's old assets in Leland Enterprises, Edmund promptly moved out of the crummy apartment. Still, he wasn't one to mingle with the rich and famous either. So his new place was fairly upscale, but nothing too noticeable about it. Sheek without being pretentious. Plus in this neighborhood it blended in enough to give Edmund a good sense of security. Julian was out of town on business, so Edmund had been keeping his eye on a few things for him. Right now he was considering a nap. It had been far too long since he was in a comfortable enough position to afford one..at least he was until the doorbell rang.


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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-17 11:04 pm UTC (link)
"Thanks, Edmund. I don't like to whine too much, though. Better to focus on the good times, right?"

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-17 11:25 pm UTC (link)
"True. I finally got to move out of that crappy apartment, move into a nice neighborhood. I got a lot to be grateful for myself." He sighs and leans back. "You got talented hands."

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-17 11:42 pm UTC (link)
"Thank you. I'm afraid this is all I can really do from this position. So... do you want to lie down, or should I go get you something from the kitchen, or... should you just tell me where my room is?"

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-17 11:55 pm UTC (link)
"Minnie," he looks up at her compassionately. "What do YOU want to do? You are MY guest after all."

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 12:13 am UTC (link)
"I don't want to make this weird for you, Edmund," she says softly.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 12:18 am UTC (link)
"Minnie, you're the first friend I've made since coming home for good. I wanna do right by you." He smiles reassuringly at her. "I'm adaptable. Please."

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 12:22 am UTC (link)
She smiles. "Thanks, Ed. I'd...like to dance for you, actually."

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 12:26 am UTC (link)
He smiles warmly. "I'd like that. I seem to recall that you still owe me one, actually," he said, recalling when they first met.

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 12:32 am UTC (link)
"Never did get around to it, did I? Been so busy." She smiles and finds a clear space. She almost takes out her Ipod, but instead, turns on his stereo. She recognizes the opening of 'Symphony of Destruction,' smiles, and gets into it.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 12:37 am UTC (link)
Edmund sits back. Minnie has his undivided attention.

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 01:01 am UTC (link)
Her hips were going as she strutted across the floor, unbuttoning her shirt and then sloughing it off.

As the chorus hits, her arms raise in quick, staccato movements to match it. And then... well, one wonders if the human leg was meant to kick up straight verticle like that. Especially in a miniskirt, which gets a lot more loosened from the experience, then is writhed out of slowly after the leg comes down.

Hips still moviong to the beat, she gets down on othe floor to finish kicking said skirt off.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 01:44 am UTC (link)
Edmund takes a deep breath to steady himself. He's half-tempted to ask how she got so flexible, but doesn't want to ruin the moment.

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 01:57 am UTC (link)
Now down to just underclothes and shoes -- and, of course, the choker. Minnie only ever took it off when it would compromise business concerns -- Minnie shifted on the floor, still writhing in time to the music, and crawled a little closer to her audience with perfect rhythm.

When the chorus hits again, she rises up onto her knees right next to where Edmund's sitting. Her arms again go through the quick, staccato port-de-bras movements... then bend back. At first they look like she's going to undo her bra, but she just Looks at Edmund, and then her hands go lower down her back, grab her underwear, and just tug at them to give them more of a ...thong look on her firm, pert backside as she rises off her knees and turns around.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 02:53 pm UTC (link)
Edmund audibly gulp a bit, hand digging in to the arms of the chair. Bit by bit he was thinking less of the oddness of the situation and more of the beautiful woman performing in front of him. Specifically what he'd like to do to her.

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Still in constant motion, she bent over backwards over Edmund's lap, eyes turning up to meet his in an almost begging way.
And then she's leaning the other way as she writhes to the music, because he's been staring at particular places occasionally since Minnie's known him, and he might as well get a good, full view.

But she always comes back to locking her eyes on him like that, until the song ends and she gives a little bow, almost collapsing to the ground in it.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 03:48 pm UTC (link)
Edmund slowly got up from the chair, eyes intense. He steps close to Minnie, but doesn't put his hands on her just yet. "This really want you want, Minnie?"

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 03:51 pm UTC (link)
"Yes, Edmund," she says softly, perfectly still

Goddessshe'ssolonelyifhedoesn'ttouchhersoonshemightcry.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 03:55 pm UTC (link)
She hides her emotions well, but Edmund can pick up a hint of the need she's concealing. Resolved at last that this was okay, he takes her face gently with both hands and kisses her passionately.

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 03:56 pm UTC (link)
Minnie trembles just a little with relief as she kisses him back.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 04:01 pm UTC (link)
The kisses grow in intensity as he stops thinking about it and instinctively goes with it. Before long he's maneuvered her close to a nearby wall.

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 04:08 pm UTC (link)
Minnie wriggles out of her remaining underclothes and starts working on Edmund's, lips unwilling to leave his as she's backed up more.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 04:12 pm UTC (link)
He helps her with the clothes where able, but like her, his lips are unwilling to leave hers. He kicks aside his discarded clothes as he braces her against the wall. He continues to kiss, but this time his hands feel along her body, admiring every curve and feature.

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 04:32 pm UTC (link)
She moans against his lips, squirming, clinging, legs starting to rise to wrap around him.

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[info]weighed_down
2011-10-18 04:35 pm UTC (link)
He brings his arms down, helping her to wrap her legs around him. he guides himself close to her entrance. "Ready, Minnie?"

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[info]yourtruecolors
2011-10-18 04:39 pm UTC (link)
"Yes," she groans, ready enough just from her performance and his touch. "Please"

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